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Should education be free from preschool to university?

Should education be free from preschool to university? QLlE3
Should education be free of charge for all students? Thare are many costs involved with education such as maintenance costs, staff salaries and material. Some people defend that students should access education since its beginning in early ages until university levels without having to pay for studying, while the government would be responsible to cover these costs. This essay will argue why the responsibility to pay for the education expenses should not be entirely of the government, but some groups have to contribute to cover the amount spent. If the education for all ages was free of charge for students in a country, that would create a favorable learning scenario, apparently. That is because there would be a wide access of people to schools and universities, which, in theory, increases the chance of people getting good jobs and salaries. Research shows that, the more years a person studies, higher is his or her annual income. Moreover, a wider access to studying opportunities is a valuable measure to tackle social inequality, for the same reason mentioned: higher chances of better employment. Thus, it seems like education free of charge has advantages that would benefit the population in general. On the other side, if nobody pays for education, that would be covered by public resources. That would not be a good idea considering the fact that the government would be overwhelmed with this financial burden and there would be not enough resources to be spent in health and infrastructure, for example, areas that are equally important. Addittionally, people usually do not value properly things that are free, for example, paying for colleges makes students to avoid failing sicne they will have to pay again in this case. For these reasons, education should not be free for everyone, in every phase of it, however some public schools and universities may offer free education to people who manage to conquer this by merit. In conclusion, this essay discussed why the costs related to studies from preschool to superior education should not be entirely attributed to public resources. In contrast, some people should pay for that and some not, depending on their financial situation and their own educational merit.
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free
of charge for all students?

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many
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costs
involved with
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education
such as maintenance
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costs
, staff salaries and material.
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Some
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people
defend that students should access
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education
since its beginning in early ages until university levels without having to
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pay
for studying, while the
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government
would be responsible to cover these
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costs
. This essay will argue why the responsibility to
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pay
for the
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education
expenses should not be
entirely
of the
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government
,
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but
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some
groups
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have to
contribute to cover the amount spent.

If the
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education
for all ages was
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free
of charge for students in a country, that would create a favorable learning scenario,
apparently
.
That is
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because
there would be
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a wide access
of
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people
to schools and universities, which, in theory, increases the chance of
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people
getting
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good
jobs and salaries. Research
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shows
that, the more years a person studies, higher is
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his or her
annual income.
Moreover
, a wider access to studying opportunities is a valuable measure to tackle social inequality, for the same reason mentioned: higher chances of better employment.
Thus
, it seems like
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education
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free
of charge has advantages that would benefit the population
in general
.

On the other side, if nobody
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pays
for
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education
, that would
be covered
by public resources. That would not be a
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good
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idea
considering the fact that the
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government
would
be overwhelmed
with this financial burden and there would be not
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enough
resources to
be spent
in health and infrastructure,
for example
, areas that are
equally
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important
.
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Addittionally
,
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people
usually
do not value
properly
things that are
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free
,
for example
, paying for colleges
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makes
students to avoid failing
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sicne
they will
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have to
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pay
again
in this case
. For these reasons,
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education
should not be
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free
for everyone, in every phase of it,
however
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some
public schools and universities may offer
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free
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education
to
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people
who manage to conquer this by merit.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed why the
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costs
related to studies from preschool to superior
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education
should not be
entirely
attributed to public resources.
In contrast
,
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some
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people
should
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pay
for that and
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some
not, depending on their financial situation and their
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own
educational merit.
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IELTS essay Should education be free from preschool to university?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
364 words
6.0
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