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Should art and music be compulsory subjects?

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As per my opinion arts and music should be compulsory subject because it gives time for student to divert from only listening and learning in school which becomes monotonous for students and sometimes it becomes reason for lack of concentration. Schools should give an option to select either arts or music to student as per their interest. something related to interest of people helps in concentration of other studies. As it became compulsory students will have compulsion to do out of the way learning. It even lightens the mood of schools ehich increase their learning ability which is key to score high in academic studies. .

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