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The reading and the lecture both discuss eleventh century silver coin and Norse settlements.

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The reading and the lecture both discuss eleventh century silver coin and Norse settlements. While the reading states that this coin are not genuine historical evidence and provide three reasons of support, the lecture refutes this, saying in favor of that topic and support that it is genuine. First of all, the reading claims this coin are found far away from the sites of Norse. Norse settlement are found in near the Canada, this thousand kilometers distance reflect this coin are not related to Norse settlement. However, the lecture argues that this distance are not reflect that they are not connected with Norse settlements. Moreover, some elements are found far away from north america. In addition, the reading makes the argument that no other coins found in canadian site, that's means Norse did not bring any silver coins with them from north american settlements. The lecture refute this point by saying that Norse have bring silver coins with them but when the travel another area the probably return back silver coin with them. Finally, the reading passage argues that silver coins are useless to north america but it use in Europe at that time. North american don't recognized silver coin as money. The lecture refute this points by saying that silver coin are not usable that time it not right, because silver coins are attractive to business man. it will be used as nekless, jewelry.
The
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and the
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both discuss eleventh century
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silver
coin and Norse
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settlements
. While the
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states that this coin are not genuine historical evidence and provide three reasons of support, the
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lecture
refutes this, saying in favor of that topic and support that it is genuine.

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, the
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claims this coin are
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found
far away from the sites of Norse. Norse
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settlement
are
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found
in near the Canada, this thousand kilometers distance reflect this coin are not related to Norse
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settlement
.
However
, the
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argues that this distance are not
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reflect
that they are not connected with Norse
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settlements
.
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,
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some
elements are
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found
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north america
.

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, the
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the argument that no other coins
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found
in
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canadian
site, that's means Norse did not bring any
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silver
coins with them from
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north american
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settlements
. The
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lecture
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refute
this point by saying that Norse have
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bring
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silver
coins with them
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when the travel another area the
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return back
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coin with them.

Finally
, the
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passage argues that
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silver
coins are useless to
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north america
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it
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use
in Europe at that time.
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North american
don't recognized
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silver
coin as money. The
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lecture
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refute
this points by saying that
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silver
coin are not usable that time it not right,
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because
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silver
coins are attractive to business
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man
.
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it
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nekless
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IELTS essay The reading and the lecture both discuss eleventh century silver coin and Norse settlements.

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