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Should animal testing be banned?

Should animal testing be banned? LB5m8
Before distributed, many products, such as drugs, pills and make-ups, must be tested so that it can be possible to comprehend how these products affect the human body. Therefore, there has been found an appealing way for the purpose of ensuring that the products are not harmful. In other words, numerous animals have been preferred to be tested to observe all effects of the products. However, even though animal testing is a convenient way to analyze the products, this may not be the best method. Firstly, the results after the animal tests may seem to guarantee that products are appropriate to be delivered and consumed by the public; nevertheless, it is likely to observe a number of adverse effects which are not seen in animals. In other words, the findings obtained after tests with animals prior to experiments carried out with humans may differ to a considerable degree. Ergo, it can be said that animal tests waste the time of scientists analyzing goods and marketers endeavouring to persuade people to purchase their product due to the test's providing them with erroneous results. Secondly, other methods in which humans participate in testing products may be selected since the goods tested on animals are eventually consumed by humans. However, that the tests involving humans are regarded as activities able to constitute a grave peril for the participants is a well-known fact. Nonetheless, so as to overcome that problem, the products whose features are wanted to be apparent can be tested on humans without any fear by using some techniques based on micro-dosing. To wit, if the progress of exposing the subjects to the material being tested constitutes a difficulty, the dose can be diminished effortlessly. It is generally claimed that the number of animals used in tests is not enormous; moreover, animals are suitable for being tested owing to their similarity to humans. However, whether the number of animals used is not tremendous, their being used as subjects of products whose effects are not necessarily known result in researchers miscalculating and examining the tested product incorrectly. In conclusion, although the use of animals in scientific research may constitute a convenient way, it hurts animals and leads researchers to acquire wrong results. Therefore, even if it is not possible to forbid animal testing entirely, the number of tests is to be reduced.
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products
, such as drugs, pills and
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make
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must
be
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tested
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so
that it can be possible to comprehend how these
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products
affect the
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human
body.
Therefore
, there has
been found
an appealing way for the purpose of ensuring that the
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products
are not harmful.
In other words
, numerous
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animals
have
been preferred
to be
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tested
to observe all effects of the
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products
.
However
,
even though
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animal
testing is a convenient way to analyze the
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products
, this may not be the best method.

Firstly
, the results after the
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animal
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tests
may seem to guarantee that
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products
are appropriate to
be delivered
and consumed by the public;
nevertheless
, it is likely to observe a
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number
of adverse effects which are not
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seen
in
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animals
.
In other words
, the findings obtained after
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tests
with
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animals
prior to experiments carried out with
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humans
may differ to a considerable degree. Ergo, it can
be said
that
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animal
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tests
waste the time of scientists analyzing
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goods
and marketers
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endeavouring
to persuade
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people
to
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purchase
their
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product
due to the
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test
's providing them with erroneous results.

Secondly
, other methods in which
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humans
participate in testing
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products
may
be selected
since the
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goods
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tested
on
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animals
are
eventually
consumed by
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humans
.
However
, that the
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tests
involving
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humans
are regarded
as activities able to constitute a grave peril for the participants is a well-known fact. Nonetheless,
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so as to
overcome that problem, the
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products
whose features
are wanted
to be apparent can be
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tested
on
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humans
without any fear by using
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some
techniques based on micro-dosing. To wit, if the progress of exposing the subjects to the material being
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tested
constitutes a difficulty, the dose can
be diminished
effortlessly
.

It is
generally
claimed that the
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number
of
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animals
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used
in
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tests
is not enormous;
moreover
,
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animals
are suitable for being
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tested
owing to their similarity to
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humans
.
However
, whether the
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number
of
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animals
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used
is not tremendous, their being
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used
as subjects of
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products
whose effects are not
necessarily
known result in researchers miscalculating and examining the
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tested
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product
incorrectly
.

In conclusion
, although the
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use
of
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animals
in scientific research may constitute a convenient way, it hurts
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animals
and leads researchers to acquire
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wrong
results.
Therefore
, even if it is not possible to forbid
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animal
testing
entirely
, the
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number
of
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tests
is to be
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reduced
.
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IELTS essay Should animal testing be banned?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
389 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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