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Should All High School Students Be Required To Complete Parenting Classes?

Should All High School Students Be Required To Complete Parenting Classes? PrELj
It has become a common knowledge that parenting is a skill that oftentimes requires a long term of learning. Upon this fact, many believe giving it as a subject in high school would be a benefit to the youth. Unfortunately, bringing it to practice would be harder than expected. To this day, parenthood remains a vague material to society. There are no ‘rights-and-wrongs’ in taking care of children because every parent gives different ways of approach and response. Unlike compulsory subjects in school, this makes parenting not capable of having an actual standardized test. The terms would be too complicated and the examination even more so. Not to mention, making parenting mandatory in classes would cost quite a fortune. Since parenting is not a common skill required in the workfield, finding the right instructors would be difficult and expensive. In addition, most of the cases need to be demonstrated and thus, require particular facilities too. For example, schools might actually have to provide a real baby in order to teach students how to coddle one.
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that oftentimes requires a long term of learning. Upon this fact,
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many
believe giving it as a subject in high school would be a benefit to the youth. Unfortunately, bringing it to practice would be harder than
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To this day, parenthood remains a vague material to society. There are no ‘rights-and-wrongs’ in taking care of children
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because
every parent gives
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different
ways of approach and response. Unlike compulsory subjects in school, this
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makes
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parenting
not capable of having an actual standardized
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
. The terms would be too complicated and the examination even more
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so
. Not to mention, making
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parenting
mandatory in classes would cost quite a fortune. Since
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parenting
is not a common
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
required in the
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workfield
, finding the right instructors would be difficult and expensive.
In addition
, most of the cases need to
be demonstrated
and
thus
, require particular facilities too.
For example
, schools might actually
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
provide a real baby in order to teach students how to coddle one.
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IELTS essay Should All High School Students Be Required To Complete Parenting Classes?

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