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Shopping plan with friends

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I would love to join you guys tomorrow! Should we go to the Pavilion tomorrow? I've heard that Under Armour are having a sale this week. I wanted to buy new cap and shoes for me to jog. Apart from that, we can eat at Killer Gourmet Burgers. I believe there's no one who hate eating burger since its extra yummy! I've tried it before so don't you worry about how it taste. Besides, the price is quite affortable. We should invite Danial and Adam to join us tomorrow because the more the merrier

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love
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join
 you guys tomorrow! Should we go to the Pavilion tomorrow? I've heard that Under Armour are having a sale this week. I wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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before
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so
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don't
 you worry about how it Did you mean "tastes"?tastes
taste
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affortable
. We should invite Danial and Adam to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
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because
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IELTS essay Shopping plan with friends

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

93 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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