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Shopping plan with friends

Shopping plan with friends dkejE
I would love to join you guys tomorrow! Should we go to the Pavilion tomorrow? I've heard that Under Armour are having a sale this week. I wanted to buy new cap and shoes for me to jog. Apart from that, we can eat at Killer Gourmet Burgers. I believe there's no one who hate eating burger since its extra yummy! I've tried it before so don't you worry about how it taste. Besides, the price is quite affortable. We should invite Danial and Adam to join us tomorrow because the more the merrier
I would
love
to
join
you guys tomorrow! Should we go to the Pavilion tomorrow? I've heard that Under Armour are having a sale this week. I wanted to
buy
new cap and shoes for me to jog. Apart from that, we can eat at Killer Gourmet Burgers. I believe there's no one who hate eating burger since its extra yummy! I've tried it
before
so
don't
you worry about how it
taste
.
Besides
, the price is quite
affortable
. We should invite Danial and Adam to
join
us tomorrow
because
the more the
merrier
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IELTS essay Shopping plan with friends

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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