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Shopping online is becoming more popula

Shopping online is becoming more popula DNG36
Shopping online is becoming more popular in recently years in several countries. It is argued that shopping online, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more common. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages. I am inclined to agree with this view that there are many advantages of buyings on the internet for several reasons presentes accordingly. People who think that shopping online is a bad way to shopping often give two reasons. Firstly, we can' t touch or feel the products myself, can' t try them on; consequently, we not sure if they suit me. For example, when we buy clothes, we can' t guarantee the quality and size is right. Secondly, delivery takes time and sometimes delays, which will make we feel very annoying. In my opinion, one month ago, I bought a book by shopping online, on schedule, I can receive the book after two days i bought. However, it was delayed to three days, which made me feel annoying because I was looking forward to this book. However, from my perspective, there are many advantages of buying on the internet. The most important reason is that save time and effert going to shops. Since, we don't need to take lots of time to travel and choose from different shops, we don' t have to bargain. More importantly, a wide range of products from online shops all over the world, which we can buy anything we need. In my opinion, I have ordered in many diffenrent countries, it' s very diverse in terms of items; therefore, we can buy anything we need. In conclusion, some believe that buying on the internet are very inconvenience because we can' t choose desired items and sometimes it' s can make we feel very annoying. However, I think that shopping online is a good way to buy is due to save time and have a wide range of products from online shops all over the world. The governments should using shopping on the internet.
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, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more common.
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give two reasons.
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the products myself,
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can'
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, we not sure if they suit me.
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, when we
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clothes, we
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, delivery takes
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and
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delays, which will
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annoying. In my opinion, one month ago, I
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a book by
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, on schedule, I can receive the book after two days
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annoying
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because
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, from my perspective, there are
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advantages of buying on the internet. The most
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important
reason is that save
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time
and
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going to
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. Since, we don't need to take lots of
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time
to travel and choose from
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different
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shops
, we don' t
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have to
bargain. More
importantly
, a wide range of products from
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online
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shops
all over the world, which we can
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anything we need. In my opinion, I have ordered in
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diffenrent
countries, it' s
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diverse in terms of items;
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anything we need.

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,
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believe that buying on the internet are
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inconvenience
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sometimes
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feel
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very
annoying.
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, I
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that
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online
is a
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way to
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is due to save
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time
and have a wide range of products from
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online
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shops
all over the world. The
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should
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IELTS essay Shopping online is becoming more popula

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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