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Shopping is getting popular day by day

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In the present scenario online shopping is become more popular day by day. The people are buying books, air tickets, groceries and etc. Well, it's obvious that the proportion of advantages are over disadvantages. Becuase, whatever we need to buy we can buy it from our home and don't need to go outside for buying anything. In temrs of advantages, there are ample amount of advantages to buy things from online I would love to mention some of them. Thus, online food delivery is the huge advantage. Moreover, online shopping. Such as a person need to go for shopping urgently because of the rainy weather that person cannot go outside then that man decided buy their all the urgent needs from online, so, go to the internet and perchase all of the needs after 30 minutes that man got all the products in his hand. In terms of disadvantages, the disadvantage which is broad number of people faced that the quality of the products. Furthermore, the people need to believe photos for buying things from online because online doesn't have that access that you can buy products by checking. Therefore, people need to see some positive review about that products quality in the internet. To give a clear example, someone is ordered an original gucci brand shoes in online but they got a shoes which is neither gucci showes not quality shoes, they give them a low quality shoes with a gucci sticker. Although, that's how people get suffer with the quality of products when they buy from online. In conclusion, there are only few number of disadvantages whereas advantages ratio higher than disadvantages without any doubt. However, whenever people get their product delivery they should chech their product in front of the delivery man if they can see that their product as same as their expectations then they can leave the delivery man.
In the present scenario
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online
shopping
is become
more popular day by day. The
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people
are buying books, air tickets, groceries
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and etc
. Well, it's obvious that the proportion of
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advantages
are over disadvantages.
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Becuase
, whatever we
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need
to
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buy
we can
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buy
it from our home and don't
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need
to go outside for buying anything.

In
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temrs
of
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advantages
, there are ample
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amount
of
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advantages
to
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buy
things from
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online
I would
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love
to mention
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some
of them.
Thus
,
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online
food
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delivery
is the huge
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advantage
.
Moreover
,
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online
shopping. Such as a person
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need
to go for shopping
urgently
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because
of the rainy weather that person cannot go outside then that
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man
decided
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buy
their all the urgent
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needs
from
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online
,
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so
, go to the internet and
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perchase
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all of the
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needs
after 30 minutes that
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man
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got
all the
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products
in his hand.

In terms of disadvantages, the
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disadvantage
which is broad number of
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people
faced that the
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quality
of the
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products
.
Furthermore
, the
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people
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need
to believe photos for buying things from
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online
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because
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online
doesn't have that access that you can
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buy
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products
by checking.
Therefore
,
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people
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need
to
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see
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some
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positive
review about that
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products
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quality
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in the internet
. To give a
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clear
example, someone
is ordered
an original
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gucci
brand
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shoes
in
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online
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but
they
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got
a
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shoes
which is neither
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gucci
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showes
not
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quality
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shoes
, they give them a low
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quality
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shoes
with a
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gucci
sticker. Although, that's how
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people
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get
suffer with the
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quality
of
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products
when they
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buy
from online.

In conclusion
, there are
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only
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few number
of disadvantages whereas
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advantages
ratio higher than disadvantages without any doubt.
However
, whenever
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people
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get
their
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product
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delivery
they should
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chech
their
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product
in front of the
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delivery
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man
if they can
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see
that their
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product
as same as their expectations then they can
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leave
the
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delivery
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man
.
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IELTS essay Shopping is getting popular day by day

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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