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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlegde or experience.

Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society. knKd

Malls numbers are increasing over the pass few years and they are offering plenty of interesting activities to each day to the public. A certain segment of society assume that shopping is lasting some drawback while other believe that this provide an amazing experience to customer. I personally believe that shopping has a greatly positive impact on human evolution. To begin with, shopping centre are able to provide a plethora of products variety for various type of customers just in one place. For instance, clients can usually find restaurants, park access, technology centres and myriad of accessories in one locations easily, additionally, shopping is excellent place to catch up the friends and colleagues for conversation. Also it is one the best place to buy the cheapest items besides to enjoying a fantastic weekends with families. A brief explanation, shopping has been rising the products sell hence they are creating an employment opportunity for a lot of people. For example, when an entrepreneur decide to construct a mall centre they will need get the service of professionals for particular job to be carried since the job done, they are required a continues maintenance services to keep it intend. Although, they have been stimulating compulsory purchase and customer usually spend more on the unnecessary items and sometime people are not able to pay out their expenses, if adequate measure not taken by the clients, it will probably lead to serious problem in the life. To recapitulate, the shopping centres are necessary to keep our community developing and they have huge beneficial impact on social activities, in my opinion they can offer more interesting activities if we compared with other generations.

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years and
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plenty
 of interesting activities to each day to the public. A certain segment of society assume that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 is lasting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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drawback
 while other believe that The verb 'provide' is plural. Did you mean: "this provides"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?this provides
this provide
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 believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 has a greatly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 impact on human evolution.

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begin
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shopping
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centre
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just
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, clients can usually
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centres
 and myriad of accessories in Don't use the number 'one' with plural words. Did you mean "one location", "a location", or simply "locations"?one locationa locationlocations
one locations
easily
, additionally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 is excellent place to catch up the friends and colleagues for conversation. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 it is Did you mean "one of"?one of
one
 the best place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the cheapest items besides
 to enjoying a fantastic weekends with families.

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shopping
 has been rising the products sell hence
 they are creating an employment opportunity for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. For example
, when an entrepreneur decide to construct a mall Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 they will need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the service of professionals for particular job to be carried
 since the job done, they are required
 a continues maintenance services to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 it intend. Although, they have been stimulating compulsory This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 and customer usually
 spend more on the unnecessary items and sometime This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are not able to pay out their expenses, if adequate measure not taken by the clients, it will probably
 lead to serious problem in the life.

To recapitulate, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.centers
centres
 are necessary to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 our community Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).developing, and
developing and
 they have huge beneficial impact on social activities, in my opinion they can offer more interesting activities if we compared with other generations. 