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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. 0gYO
Language is a way by which people can express their feelings and thoughts. Many languages are spoken all over the world. However, some mass opine that for a particular reason their native language is beneficial for people. While, other people think opposite to it. I agree with this statement to some extent. This essay will explain my view points regarding this view in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with they are they are some reasons which are sporting the view that those people who believe that studying a language in a country where there are most of speaker of that language and it has many benefits first and foremost is a communication communication is very important for everyone's life as only a way in which people can share their problems or view if in a country everyone speak only single language then the native person cannot face any problem regarding communications and he can easily share his ideas with another beside it people have no need to learn new language because where more of speaker of 1 language live then definitely there is no requirement of second language
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is a way by which
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people
can express their feelings and thoughts.
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languages
are spoken
all over the world.
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opine that for a particular reason their native
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language
is beneficial for
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people
.
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, other
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people
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think
opposite to it. I
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with this statement to
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extent. This essay will
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explain
my
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view
points regarding this
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view
in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with
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they are they are
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some
reasons which are sporting the
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view
that those
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people
who believe that studying a
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language
in a country where there are
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most of speaker
of that
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language
and it has
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benefits
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communication communication
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for everyone's life as
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a way in which
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people
can share their problems or
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view
if in a country everyone
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speak
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only
single
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language
then the native person cannot face any problem regarding
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communications and
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share his
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ideas
with another beside it
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people
have no need to learn new
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language
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because
where more of speaker of 1
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language
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live
then definitely there is no requirement of second
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language
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IELTS essay Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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