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In present scenario, keeping pets has been become common while, other say it is dangerous for our children life. In this essay I will explain the both opinion and analyze a my perspective in further essay. Commencing with, there are several reasons behid this the major reason is that first and foremost, household animals as a family member because, many children love to play with them as well as this especially helps to develop children personality as they learn to respect other creatures on this plant. For instance, a survey conduct by international government opine that more than 90 percent children are love to keep pets at home. On the contrary, a pet has various benefits for children they caring for their friends, such as taking for a walk, feeding them and growing them teaches them to be responsible towards other animals. Moreover, dogs or cat animals also help us to reduce our chances of falling ill. Children to maintain a healthy co extance with these pets. The fur of animals like flu from birds are major factors which put the health of a child who cares them at high risk. In conclusion, given aformentioned information is quite evident that even pet keeping gives emotional happiness to children as it is potentially dangerous and un healthy.
In present scenario, keeping
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common while, other say it is
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for our
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children
life. In this essay I will
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the both opinion and analyze
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this the major reason is that
first
and foremost, household
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animals
as a family member
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,
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many
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children
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love
to play with them
as well
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helps
to develop
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children
personality as they learn to respect other creatures on this plant.
For instance
, a survey conduct by international
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government
opine that more than 90 percent
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children
are
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love
to
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keep
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pets
at home.
On the contrary
, a pet has various benefits for
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children
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they caring
for their friends, such as taking for a walk, feeding them and growing them teaches them to be responsible towards other
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animals
.
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, dogs or cat
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animals
also
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help
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reduce
our chances of falling ill.
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Children
to maintain a healthy co
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extance
with these
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pets
. The fur of
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animals
like flu from birds are major factors which put the health of a child who cares them at high
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risk
.
In conclusion
,
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given
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aformentioned
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children
as it is
potentially
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and
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healthy.
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IELTS essay Shhssh sbsjsj sis hs shs shs shsv

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
216 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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