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Sharing as much information as possible such as scientific research, business and the academic world is thought by some to be a good idea. While some people argue that information, which is crucial and valuable, should not be shared freely.

Sharing as much information as possible such as scientific research, business and the academic world is thought by some to be a good idea. While some people argue that information, which is crucial and valuable, should not be shared freely. leLob
Sharing as much information as possible such as scientific research, business and the academic world is thought by some to be a good idea. While some people argue that information, which is crucial and valuable, should not be shared freely. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. It is indelible that the qualitative information which has been in a tough process is useful to people to know about it. Because that information will have been examined, demonstrated and analyzed before will be published. It can be gain knowledge and gives the fact information to find out the good way of life. Such as some research told that drinking alcohol too much will be effective to the body’s control system, so some people consider how is concerned to themself and find out to stop or reduce to drink alcohol. In contrast, some opinion support that the significant and specific detail of research and study should be received benefit if share this information. In other words, it is invaluable to unreasonable share freely, for instance, new vaccine ingredient supported by a company or national defence. As well, some people would copy and would be trying to take advantage form it. In some case, it can be hold up to commercial instead of researcher would be compensated with their working. From my point of view, the valuated data and all type of study will have been received copyright when it joins to a published conference or owner can register to get a copyright. It means that the author can prosecute to someone who is plagiarizing. While research for business or security should be kept the key and important detail to be a secret whereas it is able to launch only overview image or completed product. In conclusion, both of general study or valuable research will provide benefit to the public however it depends on the satisfaction of those owners to openly share, keep to be confidential or make prize from it.
Sharing as much
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good
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idea
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some
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people
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information
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freely
. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will
be discussed
in detail
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before
the conclusion
is reached
.

It is indelible that the qualitative
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information
which has been in a tough process is useful to
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people
to know about it.
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Because
that
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information
will have
been examined
, demonstrated and analyzed
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before
will
be published
. It can be gain knowledge and gives the fact
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information
to find out the
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good
way of life. Such as
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some
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research
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told
that drinking alcohol too much will be effective to the body’s control system,
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so
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some
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people
consider how
is concerned
to
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themself
and find out to
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stop
or
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reduce
to drink alcohol.

In contrast
,
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some
opinion support that the significant and specific detail of
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research
and study should
be received
benefit if share this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
.
In other words
, it is invaluable to unreasonable share
freely
,
for instance
, new vaccine ingredient supported by a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
or national
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defence
.
As well
,
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some
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people
would copy and would be trying to take advantage form it. In
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some
case, it can be hold up to commercial
instead
of researcher would
be compensated
with their working.

From my point of view, the valuated data and all type of study will have
been received
copyright when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joins
to a published conference or owner can register to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a copyright. It means that the author can prosecute to someone who is plagiarizing. While
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
for business or security should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
the key and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
detail to be a secret whereas it is able to launch
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
overview image or completed product.

In conclusion
, both of general study or valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
will provide benefit to the public
however
it depends on the satisfaction of those owners to
openly
share,
The verb 'keep' is used with the gerund form: "keep being".
keep to be
confidential or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
prize from it.
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IELTS essay Sharing as much information as possible such as scientific research, business and the academic world is thought by some to be a good idea. While some people argue that information, which is crucial and valuable, should not be shared freely.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
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