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Share your life experiences - Write your own story of overcoming hardships and achieving success. Follow the writing format as instructed in the online session.

Share your life experiences - Write your own story of overcoming hardships and achieving success. Follow the writing format as instructed in the online session. jbw1X
This story is about what I did to overcome difficulties that recently occured. As you know, being a 12th-grade student, most people are facing several problems with their study, especially being under pressure. And I'm not exception, even I got this kind of feeling for a long time. At first time, I was so worry that I cannot know what I want to do in the future. I cried my eyes out every night. I try to do all things to stay positive but I always failded after that. That were acutally the worst days of my life til now. However, after few days, when I could not stand the stress, I determined to tackle the problem so I decided to talk to my good brother, who had a great influence on me. In that night, he encouraged me to be confident to persue my dream of attending to my favourite university and he also shared me some ways to overcome the feeling of stress. One day later, I tended to be more confident and I felt a great sense of control. I could develope a pratical plan to study harder, and besides, I had the ability to control my emotions better. Everything has been fine up to now. Having coped with this difficlties, I find that although it is quite hard at that time, I have been more mature after all. That memory will be one of the most unforgettable period of time in my life.
This story is about what I did to overcome difficulties that recently
occured
. As you know, being a 12th-grade student, most
people
are facing several problems with their study,
especially
being under pressure. And I'm not exception, even I
got
this kind of feeling for a long
time
. At
first
time
, I was
so
worry
that I cannot know what I want to do in the future. I cried my eyes out every night. I try to do all things to stay
positive
but
I always
failded
after that. That were
acutally
the worst days of my life til
now
.
However
, after few days, when I could not stand the
stress
, I determined to tackle the problem
so
I decided to talk to my
good
brother, who had a great influence on me. In that night, he encouraged me to be confident to
persue
my dream of attending to my
favourite
university and
he
also
shared me
some
ways to overcome the feeling of
stress
. One day later, I tended to be more confident and I felt a great sense of control. I could
develope
a
pratical
plan to study harder, and
besides
, I had the ability to control my emotions better. Everything has been fine up to
now
.

Having coped with this
difficlties
, I find that although it is quite
hard
at that
time
, I have been more mature
after all
. That memory will be one of the most unforgettable period of
time
in my life.
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IELTS essay Share your life experiences - Write your own story of overcoming hardships and achieving success. Follow the writing format as instructed in the online session.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
247 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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