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sex work should be legalized

sex work should be legalized 70LR3

Should sex work be made legalized? . The decriminalization of sex work is a controversial topic in these day. Due to Thailand's heritage and culture, some people believe it should not be permitted. In fact, sex work is a job; as such, it should be treated as any other profession, as they are also individuals. In my opinion, I believe that sex work should be legalized because of the benefits to prostitutes, those who have utilized prostitution services, and the government.

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