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Self driving car is good or bad

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The author stated the possible advantages of self-driving autonomous cars over regular cars. He mentioned two points supporting this argument. First of all, the author pointed out the self-driving cars are safer than traditional cars. These cars are less prone to accidents as there is no room for human error. The lecturer put a doubt on this safety argument by introducing that the increasing amount of self-driving cars means a high volume of autonomous cars on the road, which may lead to less safe roads. Also, as the drivers do not need to engage in driving actively, the importance of a driving license will go down. The teenager and kids will be sitting in a driving seat is a concern from lecturer's end. Furthermore, the author presented another argument that the commute time can be utilized in different activities like reading or watching videos. but the lecturer raise a concern that these extra time will be used for work or heavily engaged work. He particularly raised that the driving to work place is a activity that helps to divert the pressure of daily life, and this activity helps to refresh minds, also people seems to enjoy this activity. While people will be communting with a self driving car they will lose the chance of driving to clear up their minds.

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