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Secondary echool in my life

Secondary echool in my life PVjbw
Well, it was located only 30 minutes away from my house, but I was never late for my class. My school was a four-storeyed building with a big gym in. Also, there was a big playground where we used to play in. Teachers who worked in our school were very good. They were wonderfully supportive and always available to help me with my problems. The subject that I find most difficult at school is Mathematics. Studying this subject made me feel exhausted. I really can’t cope with all these figures, theorems and integrals – I just have no gift for Mathematics.
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me with my problems.

The subject that I find most difficult at school is Mathematics. Studying this subject made me feel exhausted. I
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can’t cope with all these figures, theorems and integrals
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have no gift for Mathematics.
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IELTS essay Secondary echool in my life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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