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Seaweed is a particularly nutritious food, which absorbs and concentrates traces of a wide variety of minerals necessary to the body's health.

Seaweed is a particularly nutritious food, which absorbs and concentrates traces of a wide variety of minerals necessary to the body's health. 3xQnl
Seaweed is a particularly nutritious food, which absorbs and concentrates traces of a wide variety of minerals necessary to the body's health. Many elements may occur in seaweed - aluminium, barium, calcium, chlorine, copper, iodine and iron, to name but a few - traces normally produced by erosion and carried to the seaweed beds by river and sea currents. Seaweeds are also rich in vita­mins: indeed, Eskimos obtain a high proportion of their bodily requirements of vitamin C from the seaweeds they eat. The nutritive value of seaweed has long been recognised. For instance, there is a remarkably low incidence of goitre amongst the Japanese, and for that mat­ter, amongst our own Maori people, who have always eaten seaweeds, and this may well be attributed to the high iodine content of this food. Research into old Maori eating customs shows that jellies were made using seaweeds, fresh fruit and nuts, fuchsia and tutu berries, cape gooseberries, and many other fruits which either grew here naturally or were sown from seeds brought by settlers and explorers. Section B New Zealand lays claim to approximately 700 species of seaweed, some of which have no representation outside this country. Of several species grown worldwide, New Zealand also has a particularly large share. For example, it is estimated that New Zealand has some 30 species of Gigartina, a close relative of carrageen or Irish moss. These are often referred to as the New Zealand carrageens. The gel-forming substance called agar which can be extracted from this species gives them great commercial application in seameal, from which seameal custard is made, and in cough mixture, confectionery, cosmetics, the canning, paint and leather industries, the manufacture of duplicating pads, and in toothpaste. In fact, during World War II, New Zealand Gigartina were sent toAustralia to be used in toothpaste.
Seaweed
is a
particularly
nutritious food, which absorbs and concentrates traces of a wide variety of minerals necessary to the body's health.
Many
elements may occur in
seaweed
-
aluminium
, barium, calcium, chlorine, copper, iodine and iron, to name
but
a few
-
traces
normally
produced by erosion and carried to the
seaweed
beds by river and sea currents.
Seaweeds
are
also
rich in vita­mins:
indeed
, Eskimos obtain a high proportion of their
bodily
requirements of vitamin C from the
seaweeds
they eat.

The nutritive value of
seaweed
has long been
recognised
.
For instance
, there is a
remarkably
low incidence of
goitre
amongst the Japanese, and for that mat­ter, amongst our
own
Maori
people
, who have always eaten
seaweeds
, and this may well
be attributed
to the high iodine content of this food. Research into
old
Maori eating customs
shows
that jellies
were made
using
seaweeds
, fresh fruit and nuts, fuchsia and tutu berries, cape gooseberries, and
many
other fruits which either grew here
naturally
or
were sown
from seeds brought by settlers and explorers.

Section B

New Zealand lays claim to approximately 700 species of
seaweed
,
some
of which have no representation outside this country. Of several species grown worldwide,
New
Zealand
also
has a
particularly
large share.
For example
, it
is estimated
that
New
Zealand has
some
30 species of
Gigartina
, a close relative of
carrageen
or Irish moss. These are
often
referred to as the
New
Zealand
carrageens
. The gel-forming substance called agar which can
be extracted
from this species gives them great commercial application in
seameal
, from which
seameal
custard
is made
, and in cough mixture, confectionery, cosmetics, the canning, paint and leather industries, the manufacture of duplicating pads, and in toothpaste. In fact, during World War II,
New
Zealand
Gigartina
were
sent
toAustralia
to be
used
in toothpaste.
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IELTS essay Seaweed is a particularly nutritious food, which absorbs and concentrates traces of a wide variety of minerals necessary to the body's health.

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