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tion): Are you currently involved in your local YES alumni network and activities? If so, how? If not, in what ways would you like to become involved?

tion): Are you currently involved in your local YES alumni network and activities? If so, how? If not, in what ways would you like to become involved? 2rJMM
Since the year I came back from my exchange program, I have been an active member of my local AFS chapter. To begin with, I am a member of the sending department and the office bearer of my local AFS chapter. So far, I have participated in 2 discovery days and have assisted my senior office bearer in preliminary application screenings including KLYES and Asia Kakehashi program. Moreover, I have been a part of quite a few community service projects including, making a traffic rules& regulation app in collaboration with the traffic police of my city to reduce accidents. I have also planned a community service event for my local chapter on AFS India day in 2020. Furthermore, I have also been a part of several online events, workshops and alumni engagement projects conducted by AFS India, including Change For Good and virtual Inter chapter cultural exchange programs. I was also one of the trainers in the recent virtual Pre departure orientations of YES recipients.
Since the year I came back from my exchange program, I have been an active member of my local AFS chapter.

To
begin
with, I am a member of the sending department and the office bearer of my local AFS chapter.
So
far, I have participated in 2 discovery days and have assisted my senior office bearer in preliminary application screenings including
KLYES
and Asia
Kakehashi
program.

Moreover
, I have been a part of quite a few community service projects including, making a traffic
rules&
regulation app in collaboration with the traffic police of my city to
reduce
accidents. I have
also
planned a community service
event
for my local chapter on AFS India day in 2020.

Furthermore
, I have
also
been a part of several online
events
, workshops and alumni engagement projects conducted by AFS India, including
Change
For
Good
and virtual Inter chapter cultural exchange programs. I was
also
one of the trainers in the recent virtual
Pre
departure orientations of YES recipients.
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IELTS essay tion): Are you currently involved in your local YES alumni network and activities? If so, how? If not, in what ways would you like to become involved?

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