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Searching about family history

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In the recent climate, searching about history in order to find out about roots and ancestors have grown beyond cognitions. Meanwhile, many individuals have become inquisitive about the history of the homes on which they have been living. Knowing the story behind the building of the house and finding out about the place which was developed on the land prior to the construction of the new building are logical reasons for this new hobby. Moreover, people can find data regarding their homes by searching archives and asking elderly neighbors. In today's world, many are interested to know about the history of their buildings. One explanation could be to find out a new story about their family. These persons are curious about the people who lived before them. An example could be a recent family who recognized they are grand grandchildren of a famous painter. Another reason is that people have a tendency to know what building is in their land before the development of their houses. They believe if they were lucky, they could find precious items to sell. Take, as a case in point, a couple who understood their house has been built on an old gold quarry, and now they are a wealthy family. That is why many spirits are willing to research the history of their home. There are, on the other hand, some ways to assist these kinds of people in searching for details. They are able to use the city council’s archives in order to comprehend who lived there before them and analyze those documentaries from a historical perspective. What is more is that often there are some elder persons, living in the neighborhood, can help about the past. Rarely are their details incorrect. From what has been discussed, and in order to draw a conclusion, knowing about history, particularly about houses and buildings is essential for some. Consecutively, they can gain information by searching and questioning pieces of evidence or elders.
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out about roots and ancestors have grown beyond
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. Meanwhile,
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of the homes on which they have been living. Knowing the story behind the
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building
of the
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house
and finding out about the place which
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on the land prior to the construction of the new
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building
are logical reasons for this new hobby.
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,
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people
can
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data regarding their homes by
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archives and asking elderly neighbors.

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history
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buildings
. One explanation could be to
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find
out a new story about their family. These persons are curious about the
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them. An example could be a recent family
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recognized they are grand grandchildren of a
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painter. Another reason is that
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people
have a tendency to know what
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is in their land
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before
the development of their
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houses
. They believe if they were lucky, they could
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find
precious items to sell. Take, as a case in point, a couple
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who
understood their
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house
has
been built
on an
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old
gold quarry, and
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now
they are a wealthy family.
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why
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spirits are willing to research the
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history
of their home.

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ways to assist these kinds of
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in
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for
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. They are able to
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the city council’s archives in order to comprehend
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who
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lived
there
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before
them and analyze those documentaries from a historical perspective.
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there are
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elder persons, living in the neighborhood, can
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about the past.
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incorrect.

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, and in order to draw a conclusion, knowing about
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,
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about
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houses
and
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buildings
is essential for
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.
Consecutively
, they can gain information by
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and questioning pieces of evidence or elders.
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IELTS essay Searching about family history

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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