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During the sleep, Antidiuretic hormone (ADH) has been increase because it have to control and prevent the production of dilute urine. A

During the sleep, Antidiuretic hormone (ADH) has been increase because it have to control and prevent the production of dilute urine. A lLDPX
In the present, our lives has been change into the modern lifestyle. Modern lifestyle means to the new character of live skill including work harder, less exercise and technology, moreover, those factor could effective to the daily life routine. Sleep, eat and awake should be on the time by the nature behavior of body it means that human has to do a same thing at the same time because our Brian will remember it. When the Brian remember the day routine it will release a specific hormone in a specific time. For example, If your sleep in 22: 00 p. m. , your body will release a melatonin before 22: 00 p. m. to make your feel sleepy at the same time if your take a sleep in the identical time it will related identical to awake time. Sleep has potential to play important role in our body including the control a hormone.
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into the modern lifestyle. Modern lifestyle means to the new character of
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including work harder, less exercise and technology,
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our Brian will remember it.
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your body will release a melatonin
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if your take a
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IELTS essay During the sleep, Antidiuretic hormone (ADH) has been increase because it have to control and prevent the production of dilute urine. A

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153 words
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