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scuss the advantages and disadvantages of online education or doing business online

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In the year 2020 came global pandemic, with it came many questions and changes in our lifestyles, few years back it was impossible to imagine majority off people study or even work from the comforts off their homes and now days its new normality, transition wasn't easy and we still have a long way to adapt but as the time goes bay we can see and define the advantages and disadvantages of studying or even doing business online

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 and define the advantages and disadvantages of studying or even doing business online

IELTS essay scuss the advantages and disadvantages of online education or doing business online

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

77 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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