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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development? v.2

Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development? v. 2
It is often argued humans will speak one united language in the future. There are differing views whether this would be a positive advancement or damaging one. I believe this approach has both advantages and disadvantages. On the positive side, one language might contribute to communication throughout the world at ease. It means, if one language is utilized by everyone, individuals will able to understand each other deeply and take advantage of it. Deprive areas, for instance, usually, have a local language which is a burden for tourists to forge a communication or even fulfill their basic demands such as renting accommodation. Therefore, the same language would be a great remedy for tackling this problem and increasing the tourism revenue in regional districts and also lift them from poverty. On the negative side, our cultural heritages are in numerous languages. Even in a sole country, there are numerous live languages used in a daily life. Obviously, each nation must preserve its customs and inform the next generations with their rich traditions and it is not going to happen unless conserving local languages. An array of ancient poems and books have been written in local languages with the aim of conveying the ethical and cultural message to youngsters will be useless if local languages disappeared. Resulting from this, being bilingual and knowing a unique mutual language seems more reasonable to satisfy in-depth communication among nations instead of knowing only one language. In balance, although speaking one language seems desirable, there are a few demerits which are undeniable. I suggest having a mutual in common language as a second language to meet the needs of globalization and communication among individuals.
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language
in the future. There are differing views whether this would be a
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positive
advancement or damaging one. I believe this approach has both advantages and disadvantages.

On the
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positive
side, one
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language
might contribute to
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communication
throughout the world at
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ease
. It means, if one
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language
is utilized
by everyone, individuals will able to understand each other
deeply
and take advantage of it. Deprive areas,
for instance
,
usually
, have a
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local
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language
which is a burden for tourists to forge a
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communication
or even fulfill their basic demands such as renting accommodation.
Therefore
, the same
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language
would be a great remedy for tackling this problem and increasing the tourism revenue in regional districts and
also
lift them from poverty.

On the
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negative
side, our cultural heritages are in numerous
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languages
. Even in a sole country, there are numerous
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live
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languages
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used
in a daily life.
Obviously
, each nation
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must
preserve its customs and inform the
next
generations with their rich traditions and it is not going to happen unless conserving
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local
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languages
. An array of ancient poems and books have
been written
in
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local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
with the aim of conveying the ethical and cultural message to youngsters will be useless if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
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languages
disappeared. Resulting from this, being bilingual and knowing a unique mutual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
seems more reasonable to satisfy in-depth
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communication
among nations
instead
of knowing
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only
one language.

In balance, although speaking one
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language
seems desirable, there are a few demerits which are undeniable. I suggest having a mutual in common
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language
as a second
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language
to
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meet
the needs of globalization and
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communication
among individuals.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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