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Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think this is positive development and negative development?

Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think this is positive development and negative development? 0O5l
There is no doubt that the level of computer usage in vehicles has increased dramatically including assisting driving. Because of this, many scientists believe that computers ultimately replace human drivers in the future. This essay will explore what is the reason behind this prediction and details why I think this is a favorable development even though it does present some disadvantages. One of the main factors why there will be more driverless cars is advancements in artificial intelligence (AI) software and its availability. These programs can operate activities which they are designed to do without any human intervention. Tesla company, for example, already have their own in-house developed automated car production line with AI technology and they continue to conduct new research on their AI system, so they can product high quality automated cars at a larger scale. Also, Google and Apple have announced their new projects on computer-controlled vehicles. If this kind of investments on developing such vehicles continue to grow, we might soon see a future with robot cars. This shifting of human drivers to robot drivers does present both positive and negative to the world. Starting with the positives, accidents rate will drastically reduce. This is because computer-controlled vehicles are developed to follow strict road rules and drive with care. For instance, whereas a person might drive through a green crossing light, a robot driver will definitely wait until it gets the red crossing light, thus reducing a chance of an accident. Another advantage of driverless cars is addressing the travelling needs of the elderly peoples who are physically unable to drive. Looking at a negative, this trend will destroy many driving jobs in the market. As computers control the car, there is no need a person to drive the vehicle. However, this problem can easily manage by the government if the money saved from the benefits utilized properly to compensate taxi drivers. In conclusion, new finding in AI technology is the main reason why there will be robot drivers in the future, and I think although this create a temporary unemployment for taxi drivers, there will be an overall positivity because of its benefits of less accidents and meeting elderly travelling needs.
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many
scientists believe that computers
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drivers
in the future. This essay will explore what is the reason behind this prediction and
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why I
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some
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One of the main factors why there will be more driverless
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cars
is advancements in artificial intelligence
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(AI)
software and its availability. These programs can operate activities which they
are designed
to do without any human intervention. Tesla
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,
for example
, already have their
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own
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developed automated
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car
production line with AI
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technology and
they continue to conduct new research on their AI system,
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they
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can product
high quality automated
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cars
at a larger scale.
Also
, Google and Apple have announced their new projects on computer-controlled
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vehicles
. If this kind of investments on developing such
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vehicles
continue to grow, we might
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soon
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a future with robot cars.

This shifting of human
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drivers
to robot
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drivers
does present both
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positive
and
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negative
to the world. Starting with the positives, accidents rate will
drastically
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reduce
. This is
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because
computer-controlled
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vehicles
are developed
to follow strict road
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rules
and
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drive
with care.
For instance
, whereas a person might
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drive
through a green crossing light, a robot
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driver
will definitely wait until it
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gets
the red crossing light,
thus
reducing a chance of an accident. Another advantage of driverless
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cars
is addressing the travelling needs of the elderly peoples who are
physically
unable to
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drive
. Looking at a
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negative
, this trend will
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destroy
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many
driving jobs in the market. As computers control the
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car
, there is no need a person to
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drive
the
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vehicle
.
However
, this problem can
easily
manage by the
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government
if the money saved from the benefits utilized
properly
to compensate taxi drivers.

In conclusion
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drivers
in the future, and I
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think
although
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this create
a temporary unemployment for taxi
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drivers
, there will be an
overall
positivity
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because
of its benefits of
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less
accidents and meeting elderly travelling needs.
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IELTS essay Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think this is positive development and negative development?

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