Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Scientists have been warning for many years already that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy. However, most people do not change their ways of living. What is causing this behavior? How can people be encouraged to change?

Scientists have been warning for many years already that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy. However, most people do not change their ways of living. What is causing this behavior? How can people be encouraged to change? oRVqb
Scientists are advising the general public not to use an excessive amount of energy, but people are not changing their lifeways. This essay will discuss the cause and solution. The major factor is that people want to sit in separate rooms, so they turn on the lights in every room. This means that children want to do their studies they cannot do this in a living room, so they spend their time in their rooms while working people need to do their official tasks; they need a separate room. As a result, they consume a lot of energy because electricity is also a form of energy. In this way, they do not like to change their lifestyles. Turning to a possible solution, I believe that the most useful solution is to use a solar panel. This means that with the help of solar panels people can lighten their homes without the use of electricity. Evidence can be seen from Sweden, they started to develop their living with the help of solar energy, so their energy consumption rate declined considerably. Now they are moving towards green energy because they understood the negative effects of excessive energy usage. According to a recent statistic from Sweden, 90% of people are started using energy from solar power. Thus, this is a beneficial solution. In conclusion, distinctive work habits are the main concern, so people do not listen to scientists although it can overcome by the usage of solar powers.
Scientists are advising the
Consider using "public".
general public
not to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
an excessive amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are not changing their
Possible spelling mistake found.
lifeways
. This essay will discuss the cause and solution.

The major factor is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
want to sit in separate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they turn on the lights in every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. This means that children want to do their studies they cannot do this in a living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they spend their time in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
while working
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
need to do their official tasks; they need a separate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
.
As a result
, they consume
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
electricity is
also
a form of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
. In this way, they do not like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
their lifestyles.

Turning to a possible solution, I believe that the most useful solution is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solar
panel. This means that with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solar
panels
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can lighten their homes without the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of electricity. Evidence can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from Sweden, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to develop their living with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
consumption rate declined
considerably
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
they are moving towards green
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they understood the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effects of excessive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
usage. According to a recent statistic from Sweden, 90% of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solar
power.
Thus
, this is a beneficial solution.

In conclusion
, distinctive work habits are the main concern,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
do not listen to scientists although it can overcome by the usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solar
powers.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Scientists have been warning for many years already that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy. However, most people do not change their ways of living. What is causing this behavior? How can people be encouraged to change?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts