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scientist says fast food is harmful for people's health.some people say that should educate people about eat less fast food others argue that education does not work.

scientist says fast food is harmful for people's health. some people say that should educate people about eat less fast food others argue that education does not work. alRRX

For people's health the scientist says fast food is harmful. some people say that should be educated to people about eat less fast food, others argue that education does not work. people eat more outside food. they preferred spicy and restaurantal food. because of busy life, most of people are working and they don't have time to cook food at home due to shortage of time or work load. they habitual that they can't cook in free day. just call and order the food is delivered at home. it is canviniance and available every. time it save our time or effort

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