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Schools should teach students about the importance of the environment by setting a good example. do you agree or disagree

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There is currently a contentious argument over the reason why schools should educate students that how important to protect the environment by setting a good example. In this essay I am going to examine potential explanations for this preference and give my opinion about it. Firstly, how we can protect our environment? In most of school has a vending machine or cafeteria for students to buy snacks or drinks and those are mostly packaging in plastics. Educate students about how terribly impact of plastic wastes to mother earth by showing a picture of floating plastic on ocean or a sea turtle eating plastic bugs. Those images are powerful. This might be first steps to reduce usage of plastic by realization of reality. Secondly, it is important to save the sage of energy to reduce CO2 to stop global warming. Teachers can encourage students to turn off the lights if they are not using or before leaving the classroom. Small realizations are key to change our behaviour. To conclude, good education gave students important knowledge and realizations about their surroundings. Without this education, we can't protect our mother earth.
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currently
a contentious argument over the reason why schools should educate
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students
that how
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important
to protect the environment by setting a
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good
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In this essay I am going to examine potential explanations for this preference and give my opinion about it.

Firstly
, how we can protect our environment?

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students
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snacks or drinks and those are
mostly
packaging in
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plastics
. Educate
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students
about how
terribly
impact of
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plastic
wastes to mother earth by showing a picture of floating
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plastic
on ocean or a sea turtle eating
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plastic
bugs. Those images are powerful. This might be
first
steps to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
usage of
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plastic
by realization of reality.

Secondly
, it is
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important
to save the sage of energy to
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reduce
CO2 to
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stop
global warming.

Teachers can encourage
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students
to turn off the lights if they are not using or
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before
leaving the classroom.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Small
realizations are key to
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change
our
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behaviour
.

To conclude
,
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good
education gave
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students
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
knowledge and realizations about their surroundings. Without this education, we can't protect our mother earth.
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IELTS essay Schools should teach students about the importance of the environment by setting a good example.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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