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Same scientist think that all computers will soon become more intelligent than human. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Same scientist think that all computers will soon become more intelligent than human. with this statement? ExE3
Not surprisingly widespread use of computers and many aspects of people' s daily live have considarable changes because of recent development in technology. Though hi- tech products were invented by human, some scientists say that computers will rapidly become more brainy than mankinds. I disagree with this view unlike others. Now I give my own opinion according to the statement. Admittedly lifestyle are changed by recent technologies in equal measure. Before computers and internet were created. Most working people had many opportunities in their work life. Some problems which related to work or job are solved quickly by computers. So mushrooming of new technologies, such as computers give works more flexibility in controlling their work and more quality results after work. Besides than they allow people to manage their own working time. They useful and effective in all branches. Despite the computer can do many tasks its memory is instability unlike people' s memory. Negetive side of computers used by humankind. It can be dangerous for people' s health. All information might be deleted when it out of order. Thus works are carried on without any computers by human. They do not give up working. In addition technological development depends on people's knowledge. They tend to develop in every sphere. So computers become smarter connected with well- educated persons. People's comprehention is increasing in order to to create new technology. To conclude, while people vary in their opinion I think that can not be smarter than human being. Although computer regarded as the greatest technology in human history, it serves for people.
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surprisingly
widespread
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use
of computers and
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many
aspects of
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people'
s daily
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live
have
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considarable
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changes
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because
of recent development in
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technology
. Though hi- tech products
were invented
by
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human
,
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some
scientists say that computers will
rapidly
become more brainy than
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mankinds
. I disagree with this view unlike others.
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Now
I give my
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own
opinion according to the statement.
Admittedly
lifestyle are
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changed
by recent
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technologies
in equal measure.
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Before
computers and internet
were created
. Most working
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people
had
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many
opportunities in their
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work
life.
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Some
problems which related to
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work
or job
are solved
quickly
by computers.
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So
mushrooming of new
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technologies
, such as computers give works more flexibility in controlling their
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work
and more quality results after
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work
.
Besides
than they
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allow
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people
to manage their
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own
working time. They useful and effective in all branches. Despite the computer can do
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many
tasks its memory is instability unlike
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people'
s memory.
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Negetive
side of computers
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used
by humankind. It can be
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dangerous
for
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people'
s health. All information might
be deleted
when it out of order.
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Thus
works
are carried
on without any computers by
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human
. They do not give up working. In
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addition
technological development depends on
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people's
knowledge. They tend to develop in every sphere.
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So
computers become smarter connected with well- educated persons.
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People's
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comprehention
is increasing in order
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to to
create new
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technology
.
To conclude
, while
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people
vary in their opinion I
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think
that can not be smarter than
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human
being. Although computer regarded as the greatest
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technology
in
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human
history, it serves for
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people
.
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IELTS essay Same scientist think that all computers will soon become more intelligent than human. with this statement?

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