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Salary vs. Job Happiness: The pros

Salary vs. Job Happiness: The pros mLGJL
It’s a once in a lifetime opportunity. You’re working at a job you love. You don’t make a whole lot of money now, but you’re able to get by. One day, a man approaches you. He tells you that he was impressed by your friendliness and he wants to offer you a job at his business. He works in another city, but the potential with this position is astronomical. Suddenly you could be making double your current salary, and there’s a lot more room for growth at this new job. Do you take it? The answer to that question may seem obvious at first, “Yes, ” but is trading away your happiness really the path to success? In my opinion, it isn’t, as the pros outweigh the cons in this scenario. Hence, in this essay, I will be discussing the benefits of doing a job you enjoy, and how fast cash isn’t the road to true contentment.
It’s a once in a lifetime opportunity.

You’re working at a job you
love
. You don’t
make
a
whole lot
of money
now
,
but
you’re able to
get
by. One day, a
man
approaches you. He
tells
you that he
was impressed
by your
friendliness and
he wants to offer you a job at his business. He works in another city,
but
the potential with this position is astronomical.
Suddenly
you could be making double your
current
salary, and there’s a lot more room for growth at this new job.

Do you take it?

The answer to that question may seem obvious at
first
, “Yes,
but
is trading away your happiness
really
the path to success? In my opinion, it isn’t, as the pros outweigh the cons in this scenario.
Hence
, in this essay, I will be discussing the benefits of doing a job you enjoy, and how
fast
cash isn’t the road to true contentment.
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IELTS essay Salary vs. Job Happiness: The pros

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
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