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Role of Teacher in the school

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First of all, We need to know that what is purpose of teacher? Why need teacher to the students? What are qualities of teacher? What is rank of teacher? The main purpose of teacher to teach the students in study and his life. Teacher should give correct knowledge. Teachers are a special blessing from God to us. They are the ones who build a good nation and make the world a better place. A teacher teaches us the importance of a pen over that of a sword. They are much esteemed in society as they elevate the living standards of people. They are like the building blocks of society who educate people and make them better human beings.
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, We need to know that what is purpose of
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teacher
? Why need
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teacher
to the students? What are qualities of
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teacher
? What is rank of
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teacher
? The main purpose of
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teacher
to teach the students in study and his life.
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Teacher
should give correct knowledge.
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Teachers
are a special blessing from God to us. They are the ones who build a
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good
nation and
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make
the world a better place. A
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teacher
teaches us the importance of a pen over that of a sword. They are much esteemed in society as they elevate the living standards of
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people
. They are like the building blocks of society who educate
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them better human beings.
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IELTS essay Role of Teacher in the school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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