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Role of robots in todays society

Role of robots in todays society 6XBK
In todays developing world, the role of robots is always on the burning discussion among many people. Some people claim that they will have an integral part in future generations while this idea is not justifiable for others taking their some possible negative effects into account. It is true that robots are highly likely to make people's life ease in many ways. Firstly, with a aim of reducing many labours in their mind, many company owners show a big preference for robots which can work twice as fast as that of manual work. In addition, more effeciency can be achieved if the job is done by artificial knowledge which is specially computerized. Saving more time for full time employees to spend past time activities or with family members is another advantage created by robots. In other words,
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claim that they will have an integral part in future generations while this
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is not justifiable for others taking their
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effects into account.

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make
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people
's life
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ways.
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aim of reducing
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in their mind,
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preference for robots which can work twice as
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as that of manual work.
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if the job
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by artificial knowledge which is
specially
computerized. Saving more time for full time employees to spend
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activities or with family members is another advantage created by robots.
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IELTS essay Role of robots in todays society

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
137 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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