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Robots will replace the teachers role in the future do you agreeor disagree?

Robots will replace the teachers role in the future do you agreeor disagree? o5aLV
In my view, nowadays teacher profusion needs a lot of energy for teaching the young generation. In my opinion, young boys and girls want to learn different subjects and sometimes choose teachers. It is often argued, that teacher's character influences to learn in various ways. The master should be experienced and they must change themselves. I want to write about dynamism and emotional character. I will give you information about both of them. From my perspective, the teachers should not be a dynamic and emotional character. Because, students do not understand the different problems and do not want to take education. For example, young boys and girls interesting in computer games and do not pay attention to different subjects. It is a huge disaster for parents as students do not towant teach. It is a reason why the teacher will not be a dynamic and emotional person. From my point of view, it is not big trouble for a job. The reason why we do not pay attention is that it does not change anything. However, if we look at effective instructors they are skilful and decide a lot of problems in the classroom. In common, I think teachers should be dynamic and emotional intelligence also have a different character for education. From my perceptive, nowadays teachers do not have only dynamism and emotional intelligence. They should know a lot of things for knowledge. Undoubtedly I think teachers have the biggest character for education. Furthermore, they need kind and skill. Thus the instructor will be smart, wise, clever, intelligent, shrewd sensible, sagacious and furthermore have dynamism and emotional character. Because they teach and look after our children. We must respect the teacher profession.
In my view, nowadays
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profusion needs
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energy for teaching the young generation. In my opinion, young boys and girls want to learn
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different
subjects and
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sometimes
choose
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teachers
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often
argued, that teacher's
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character
influences to learn in various ways. The master should
be experienced
and they
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must
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change
themselves. I want to write about dynamism and
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emotional
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character
. I will give you information about both of them.

From my perspective, the
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teachers
should not be a dynamic and
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emotional
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character
.
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Because
, students do not understand the
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different
problems and do not want to take education.
For example
, young boys and girls interesting in computer games and do not pay attention to
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different
subjects. It is a huge disaster for parents as students do not
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towant
teach. It is a reason why the
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teacher
will not be a dynamic and
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emotional
person. From my point of view, it is not
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big
trouble for a job.

The reason why we do not pay attention is that it does not
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change
anything.

However
, if we look at effective instructors they are
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skilful
and decide
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a lot of
problems in the classroom. In common, I
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think
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teachers
should be dynamic and
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emotional
intelligence
also
have a
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different
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character
for education. From my perceptive, nowadays
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teachers
do not have
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only
dynamism and
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emotional
intelligence. They should know
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a lot of
things for knowledge.

Undoubtedly
I
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think
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teachers
have the biggest
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character
for education.
Furthermore
, they need kind and
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skill
.

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Thus
the instructor will be smart, wise, clever, intelligent, shrewd sensible, sagacious and
furthermore
have dynamism and
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emotional
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character
.
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Because
they teach and look after our children. We
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must
respect the
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teacher
profession.
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IELTS essay Robots will replace the teachers role in the future do you agreeor disagree?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
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