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Robots and human development

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Human created robots long ago to serve them in their lives, duo to its capabilities of solving problems accurately. Later people are using the robots now for fun like it is something not meant for working but for entertaiment, therefore robots became one of our usual days devices it is like a mobile phone for example. Recently robots are widely upgraded and now it is good for thinking, yes as i said robots now think and it is good in solving hard problems now that humans are stuck with
Human created robots long ago to serve them in their
lives
, duo to its capabilities of solving problems
accurately
. Later
people
are using the robots
now
for fun like it is something not meant for working
but
for
entertaiment
,
therefore
robots became one of our usual days devices it is like a mobile phone
for example
. Recently robots are
widely
upgraded and
now
it is
good
for thinking, yes as
i
said robots
now
think
and it is
good in solving
hard
problems
now
that humans
are stuck
with
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IELTS essay Robots and human development

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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