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If you had a chance, would you want to move to another place?

If you had a chance, would you want to move to another place? r1J12

I had a plan to leave my homeland but this does not mean that I am not passionate for this land, the simple reason is that I need a better environment to develop my career as well as have a chance to step off the safe areas of myself. I think I will move to major cities such as Da Nang, Ho Chi Minh… If I succeed I will try to persuade my parents to live with me because that is the opportunity for me to pay back the gratitude to my parents as well as live a better life. But, maybe I will come back to my homeland to create my own career or establish a charity organization which helps develop local socio-economic as well as enhance quality of life. That’s my dream.

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leave
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but
 this does not mean that I am not passionate for this land, the simple reason is that I need a better environment to develop my career as well
 as have a chance to step off the safe areas of myself. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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move
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, Ho Chi Minh… If I succeed I will try to persuade my parents to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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because
that is
 the opportunity for me to pay back the gratitude to my parents as well
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live
 a better life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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, maybe I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back to my homeland to create my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 career or establish a charity organization which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
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socio-economic
as well
 as enhance quality of life. That’s my dream. 