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Riverpark area from 20 years ago and present area of Riverpark.

Riverpark area from 20 years ago and present area of Riverpark. GMj8L

The given information illustrates River-park area from 20 years ago and present area of Riverpark. Overall, Riverpark area is changed in many ways compare to 20 years ago and have some new features in the area like supermarket, new shops, Bird house, railway station, marina, pedestrian road. The Riverpark is now have supermarket in the place of factory and the new more shops are opened now as compare to old Riverpark. The collage area is now more wider then before and have new bird house beside of collage. Railway track have railway station now and pedestrian road is built in front of supermarket. Seaside area have marina in present. Riverpark have few things which did not changed in these few years, like library and doctor’s surgery, sunset street, river area, estuary road.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 information illustrates River-park You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 from 20 years ago and present You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of Possible spelling mistake found.River park
Riverpark
.

Overall
, Possible spelling mistake found.River park
Riverpark
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 ways compare to 20 years ago and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 features in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 like supermarket, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 shops, Bird This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, railway station, marina, pedestrian road.

The Possible spelling mistake found.River park
Riverpark
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
Consider using a past participle here: "had".had
have
 supermarket in the place of factory and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 more shops are opened
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 as compare to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
Possible spelling mistake found.River park
Riverpark
. The collage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
Use only "wider" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.wider
more wider
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
then
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 bird This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 beside of collage. Railway This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 have railway station You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoday
now
 and pedestrian road is built
 in front of supermarket. Seaside You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 have marina in present.

Possible spelling mistake found.River park
Riverpark
 have few things which did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in these few years, like library and doctor’s surgery, sunset street, river You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, estuary road. 