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Riverpark area from 20 years ago and present area of Riverpark.

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The given information illustrates River-park area from 20 years ago and present area of Riverpark. Overall, Riverpark area is changed in many ways compare to 20 years ago and have some new features in the area like supermarket, new shops, Bird house, railway station, marina, pedestrian road. The Riverpark is now have supermarket in the place of factory and the new more shops are opened now as compare to old Riverpark. The collage area is now more wider then before and have new bird house beside of collage. Railway track have railway station now and pedestrian road is built in front of supermarket. Seaside area have marina in present. Riverpark have few things which did not changed in these few years, like library and doctor’s surgery, sunset street, river area, estuary road.
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from 20 years ago and present
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of
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Riverpark
.

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,
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Riverpark
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is
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changed
in
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ways compare to 20 years ago and have
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features in the
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like supermarket,
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shops, Bird
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, railway station, marina, pedestrian road.

The
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Riverpark
is
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now
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supermarket in the place of factory and the
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more shops
are opened
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now
as compare to
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old
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Riverpark
. The collage
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is
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now
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more wider
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then
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and have
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bird
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beside of collage. Railway
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have railway station
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and pedestrian road
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in front of supermarket. Seaside
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have marina in present.

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Riverpark
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in these few years, like library and doctor’s surgery, sunset street, river
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, estuary road.
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IELTS essay Riverpark area from 20 years ago and present area of Riverpark.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
132 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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