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crime is increasing day by day. Do you agree or disagree?

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Crime is an burning issue in todays life. It is increasing and promoting fear among people of the society. There is need to tackle this issue as soon as possible to provide freedom to people who afraid to walk alone on streets. I agree with the above statement that crime is high on edge and make lives of people like they are living in prison. Crime is more due to poor government of country who is doing nothing. People who do crime are druggies, alcoholic and even they do not care about their own families. It is very important to finish the root cause of this problem. More strategies, planning is needed to be done by youth and young leaders to make society and country free of crimes.
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IELTS essay crime is increasing day by day. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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