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rite at least FOUR paragraphs describing how the Egyptian press lost its credibility and then offer a solution. v.1

rite at least FOUR paragraphs describing how the Egyptian press lost its credibility and then offer a solution. v. 1
Press play an important role in Egyptian society. it considered the 4th authority after The Legislative, the executive, and the judiciary. This term was called to the press to show its importance, but people have recently noticed that the press has strayed from its main role, which is to convey the whole truth without falsifying it or Intermingled it with personal interests. As a result, the press lost credibility. The press lost its credibility in Egypt due to several reasons. One of the causes is Newspapers are racing to publish the news without checking the accuracy. Other reasons spread unrealistic news to gain attention and increase sales, Publishing opposite news from one newspaper to another and also Spread news to try to win the hearts of high-powered people. This has led people to suspect everything that was published by the press and try to Find other ways to know the truth. Several solutions can restore the credibility between the Egyptians and press. These include That the government can put censorship on newspapers to prevent the publication of fake news. Another possible solution is for people to interrupt newspapers that report false news. But the most important step is to prepare a new generation of journalists with high credibility to gain people's trust. In conclusion, I would like to say that Egyptians awareness has increased and they won't let anyone fool them or mislead them. All these show that the ethics and principles on which the journalism stands are no longer being followed by the journalist and they have to work quickly to regain their credibility.
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play
an
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important
role in Egyptian society.
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it
considered the 4th authority after The Legislative, the executive, and the judiciary. This term
was called
to the
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press
to
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show
its importance,
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but
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people
have recently noticed that the
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press
has strayed from its main role, which is to convey the whole truth without falsifying it or Intermingled it with personal interests.
As a result
, the
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press
lost credibility.

The
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press
lost its
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credibility
in Egypt due to several reasons. One of the causes is
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Newspapers
are racing to publish the
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news
without checking the accuracy. Other reasons spread unrealistic
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news
to gain attention and increase sales, Publishing opposite
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news
from one
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newspaper
to another and
also
Spread
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news
to try to win the hearts of high-powered
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people
. This has led
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people
to suspect everything that
was published
by the
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press
and try to Find other ways to know the truth.

Several solutions can restore the
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credibility
between the Egyptians and
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press
. These include That the
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government
can put censorship on
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newspapers
to
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prevent
the publication of fake
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news
. Another possible solution is for
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people
to interrupt
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newspapers
that report false
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news
.
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But
the most
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important
step is to prepare a
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new
generation of journalists with high
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credibility
to gain
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people
's trust.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that
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Egyptians
awareness has
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increased and
they won't
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let
anyone fool them or mislead them. All these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
that the ethics and principles on which the journalism stands are no longer
being followed
by the
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journalist and
they
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have to
work
quickly
to regain their
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credibility
.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay rite at least FOUR paragraphs describing how the Egyptian press lost its credibility and then offer a solution. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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