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rights, liberty, life and the pursuit of happiness

rights, liberty, life and the pursuit of happiness D2116
3 Irrevocable human rights, liberty, life and the pursuit of happiness. Freedom is the decision to carry with one’s life doing what one needs, live where one needs, eat my judgement, and realize what one heart wants. From any part of the world, many people want to seek personal freedom in choosing their lifestyle, the opportunity to freely access wealth and seek and exchange common goals between individuals and their communities. As a result, when exercising our freedom, we must consider the rights and sentiments of those around us. Different people have different opinions, definitions and thoughts about the idea of freedom. Some speak of freedom in the political sense, others speak of social freedom, others of personal independence and others define it as religious freedom. But the fact that everyone wants to be free is true in every case.
3 Irrevocable human rights, liberty, life and the pursuit of happiness.

Freedom is the decision to carry with one’s life doing what one needs,
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live
where one needs, eat my judgement, and realize what one heart wants.

From any part of the world,
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many
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people
want to seek personal
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freedom
in choosing their lifestyle, the opportunity to
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access wealth and seek and exchange common goals between individuals and their communities.

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, when exercising our
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, we
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consider the rights and sentiments of those around us.

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Different
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people
have
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different
opinions, definitions and thoughts about the
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idea
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.
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Some
speak of
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in the political sense, others speak of social
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freedom
, others of personal independence
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and others
define it as religious
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freedom
.
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the fact that everyone wants to be free is true in every case.
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IELTS essay rights, liberty, life and the pursuit of happiness

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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