In recent years, there has been a growing recognition that many developed countries have provided poor ones with financial aid. However, it has been argued that giving money to them does not solve poverty. In my opinion, I do believe that there are many ways that a country can help another rather than lending them money.
It is important for an underdeveloped country to improve their living conditions in order to make their nation stronger and boost its economy. Rich countries can provide these nations with support similar to clean water, fresh energy and cheap live stocks. The primary reason is that this can lead to a better environment as well as increase the people’s health and well-being status. To a society as a whole, this can have positives and continuing effects and would eventually be able to deal with poverty.
Besides all those technical support, education is of equal importance. It is no exaggeration to say that increasing people’s knowledge will stimulate their creativity and help them obtain degrees so that they can make money in the long term. A standard example of this is that if a school is built in the distant mountain areas, it can help the children get a proper education and can provide them with jobs. They might be able to go to a decent college and learn about ways they can improve the surroundings of their hometown. Therefore, providing learning facilities can be a type of support from developed countries.
It therefore can be made clear that there are many different ways a rich nation can help those that are not. Some measurements are just as important as others, such as lending money, improving the environment and providing decent education.
In recent years, there has been a growing recognition that
many
developed
countries
have provided poor ones with financial aid.
However
, it has
been argued
that giving money to them does not solve poverty. In my opinion, I do believe that there are
many
ways that a
country
can
help
another
rather
than lending them money.
It is
important
for an underdeveloped
country
to
improve
their living conditions in order to
make
their nation stronger and boost its economy. Rich
countries
can provide these nations with support similar to clean water, fresh energy and
cheap
live
stocks. The primary reason is that this can lead to a better environment
as well
as increase the
people
’s health and well-being status. To a society as a whole, this can have positives and continuing effects and would
eventually
be able to deal with poverty.
Besides
all those technical support, education is of equal importance. It is no exaggeration to say that increasing
people
’s knowledge will stimulate their creativity and
help
them obtain degrees
so
that they can
make
money in the long term. A standard example of this is that if a school
is built
in the distant mountain areas, it can
help
the children
get
a proper education and can provide them with jobs. They might be able to go to a decent college and learn about ways they can
improve
the surroundings of their hometown.
Therefore
, providing learning facilities can be a type of support from
developed countries
.
It
therefore
can
be made
clear
that there are
many
different
ways a rich nation can
help
those that are not.
Some
measurements are
just
as
important
as others, such as lending money, improving the environment and providing decent education.
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