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Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries but it does not solve the poverty , so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. Pdlp
To overcome the problem of poverty in developing nations, advanced countries often helped them by financial funding. However, a number of individuals argue that developed nations should try some another ways to help impoverished states because direct monetary aid is not a appropriate method for solving the poverty. I partially agree with the given assertion owing to the fact that of corruption and negative usage.
To overcome the problem of poverty in developing nations, advanced countries
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another ways to
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impoverished states
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direct monetary aid is not
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assertion owing to the fact that of corruption and
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IELTS essay Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

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