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review briefly American accent and England accent - pronounce American accent, because of its smooth and easy to speak; perhap i have been familiar with American accent. - listen bbc news and ielts test to familiarize to Ielts test in which the speaker speak with Englanh accent. - listen & repeat and intimitate like the way they speak but with American accent. just copy stress/connecting words and familiarizing Englanh accent. * watching gameshow: - easy to hear but difficult to speak like the people in the show. i realize that they just use simple senteces and common words that i already learnyt. but i can not call out in that context. > so the problem is that i can not call out words. --> watching > transcript/write down sentences > create card+ take notes > then practice. *
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American accent and England accent

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pronounce American accent,
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perhap
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i
have been familiar with American accent.

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listen
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news and
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ielts
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test
to familiarize to
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Ielts
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test
in which the speaker
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speak
with
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Englanh
accent.

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listen & repeat and
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intimitate
like the way they
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speak
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but
with American accent.
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just
copy
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stress
/connecting words and familiarizing
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Englanh
accent.

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watching
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gameshow
:

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easy to hear
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but
difficult to
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speak
like the
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people
in the
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show
.
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realize that they
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use
simple
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senteces
and common words that i already
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learnyt
.
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but
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can not call out in that context.

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the problem is that
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can not call out words.

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IELTS essay reviewing after a passing day

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
137 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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