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"You got a dream. . . You gotta protect it. People can't do somethin' themselves, they wanna tell you you can't do it. If you want somethin', go get it. Period. " This is one of the most viral and attractive quotes of Chris Gardner in "The pursuit of happyness". Firstly, The movie inspires so many people who are disoriented, confused, unidentified. This is a very attractive and meaningful movie. Not only that, the character Chris in the film has a lot of quotes which are worth pondering. In terms of content, the content of " The pursuit of happiness" is good, giving viewers a lot of emotions but also not boring. About the character, I really admire the character of Chris in several cases in the movie. He was in the worst of times for him, but he didn't give up, helpless, just following his fate. Chris is not that person, no matter how bad it is (sometimes helpless, crying) but he still challenges himself, and in the end, he also has a happy ending.
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IELTS essay review film the pursuit of happyness

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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