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returning the jacket which left in theatre

returning the jacket which left in theatre M3qNN
I write to express my regret for leaving my jacket at your theatre I had watch the second show on 28 January and returned home and was unaware about leaving it behind I would be grateful if you help me get it was the jacket colour with two strips it is branded by reebok companies I was seated on the 15th row in the centre column my seat number was 33 I request you to kindly handover the jacket in the reception and inform the details my full name is Charles livingston I can collect it any day between 5 p. m. to 7 p. m. While returning home kindly help me get it back and please inform me which day your staff is available to handover me the item and looking forward for your positive response
I write to express my regret for leaving my jacket at your
theatre
I had
watch
the second
show
on 28 January and returned home and was unaware about leaving it behind I would be grateful if you
help
me
get
it was the jacket
colour
with two strips it
is branded
by
reebok
companies
I
was seated
on the 15th row in the
centre
column my seat number was 33 I request you to kindly handover the jacket in the reception and inform the
details
my full name is Charles
livingston
I can collect it any day between 5 p. m. to 7 p. m. While returning home kindly
help
me
get
it back and
please
inform me which day your staff is available to handover me the item and looking forward for your
positive
response
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IELTS essay returning the jacket which left in theatre

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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