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Resun behind environmental issues

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Nowadays pepole are more depandent on machines like auto mobail or industrial machinery and the result is they produce fossile fule when the start working and indirectly pepole make enviremental essu In past there are not many car on road and air is very clean and good but now car is essential think for pepole and they wont etlist one car for her family and also pepole have two wheeler like motorbike and scooterand they think it's only for facilities but behind this they ignore some thing like environmental essu and what gasses produc by vehicle when the run and it's also same for industrial equipment. Industrial revolution is good for any nation but industries MACHINERY produce hug amount of smoke and it's not good for pepole and environment but goverment only give priority for industries and the result is the harm environment and some issues occured like global warming and changing in ozone layer and responsible for this is fossil fule and smoke which can produce by vehicles and industry. In conclusion government can should take some responsibility and make some rule like odd and even rule fore vehical and also make rule for industry.
Nowadays
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pepole
are more
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depandent
on machines like auto
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mobail
or industrial machinery and the result is they
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produce
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fossile
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fule
when the
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start
working and
indirectly
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pepole
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make
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enviremental
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essu


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many
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car
on road and air is
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very
clean and
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good
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but
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now
car is essential
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think
for
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pepole and
they
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wont
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etlist
one car for her family and
also
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pepole
have
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two wheeler
like motorbike and
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scooterand
they
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think
it's
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only
for facilities
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but
behind this they
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ignore
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some thing
like environmental
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essu
and what gasses
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produc
by vehicle when the run and it's
also
same for industrial equipment.

Industrial revolution is
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good
for any nation
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but
industries MACHINERY
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produce
hug amount of smoke and it's not
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good
for
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pepole
and environment
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but
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goverment
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only
give priority for industries and the result is the harm environment and
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some
issues
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occured
like global warming and changing in ozone layer and responsible for this is fossil
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fule
and smoke which can
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produce
by vehicles and industry.

In conclusion
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government
can should take
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some
responsibility and
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make
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some
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rule
like odd and even
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rule
fore
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vehical
and
also
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make
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rule
for industry.
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IELTS essay Resun behind environmental issues

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
196 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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