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Nowadays pepole are more depandent on machines like auto mobail or industrial machinery and the result is they produce fossile fule when the start working and indirectly pepole make enviremental essu In past there are not many car on road and air is very clean and good but now car is essential think for pepole and they wont etlist one car for her family and also pepole have two wheeler like motorbike and scooterand they think it's only for facilities but behind this they ignore some thing like environmental essu and what gasses produc by vehicle when the run and it's also same for industrial equipment. Industrial revolution is good for any nation but industries MACHINERY produce hug amount of smoke and it's not good for pepole and environment but goverment only give priority for industries and the result is the harm environment and some issues occured like global warming and changing in ozone layer and responsible for this is fossil fule and smoke which can produce by vehicles and industry. In conclusion government can should take some responsibility and make some rule like odd and even rule fore vehical and also make rule for industry.

Nowadays Possible spelling mistake found.peoplepep ole
pepole
 are more Possible spelling mistake found.dependent
depandent
 on machines like auto Possible spelling mistake found.Mobilmo bailmob ail
mobail
 or industrial machinery and the result is they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductiongoodscrop
produce
Possible spelling mistake found.fossilfossilsfissilefossil e
fossile
Possible spelling mistake found.fullrulefilefuelfusemule
fule
 when the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working and indirectly
Possible spelling mistake found.peoplepep ole
pepole
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
Possible spelling mistake found.environmental
enviremental
Possible spelling mistake found.ESSEsauESSDESSS
essu


In past there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "cars"?cars
car
 on road and air is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 clean and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 car is essential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 for Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).pepole, and
pepole and
 they Please make sure you mean 'wont' (a habit), not "won't"/"won’t" (short for 'will not')?won'twon’t
wont
Possible spelling mistake found.enlist
etlist
 one car for her family and also
Possible spelling mistake found.peoplepep ole
pepole
 have This word is normally spelled with hyphen.two-wheeler
two wheeler
 like motorbike and Possible spelling mistake found.scooter and
scooterand
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for facilities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 behind this they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore
Did you mean "something"?something
some thing
 like environmental Possible spelling mistake found.ESSEsauESSDESSS
essu
 and what gasses Possible spelling mistake found.produceproduct
produc
 by vehicle when the run and it's also
 same for industrial equipment.

Industrial revolution is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for any nation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 industries MACHINERY You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductiongoodscrop
produce
 hug amount of smoke and it's not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for Possible spelling mistake found.peoplepep ole
pepole
 and environment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Possible spelling mistake found.government
goverment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 give priority for industries and the result is the harm environment and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 issues Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "occurred", the past tense form of the verb 'occur'?occurred
occured
 like global warming and changing in ozone layer and responsible for this is fossil Possible spelling mistake found.fullrulefilefuelfusemule
fule
 and smoke which can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductiongoodscrop
produce
 by vehicles and industry.

In conclusion
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 can should take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 responsibility and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "rules"?rules
rule
 like odd and even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 fore Possible spelling mistake found.medicalvehicleverticalethicalhelicallexical
vehical
 and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 for industry. 