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Renting your room in your apartment to a student

Renting your room in your apartment to a student 1A0eA

I am postgraduate student in your University, there is space in my apartment where a student can rent my space. The room is attached with bathroom and one small study area. The rooms will be cleaned every week by servant maid and we everyday offer breakfast and dinner for the student, lunch has to be taken care by the student. We have car parking facilities for the student which is all included in the rent. The rent is so cheap that every student may wish to occupy as soon as possible

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am postgraduate
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student
 in your University, there is space in my apartment where a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 can rent my space. The room is attached
 with bathroom and one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 study area. The rooms will be cleaned
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we everyday
 offer breakfast and dinner for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
, lunch This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
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 care by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
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. We have car parking facilities for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
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 which is all included in the rent. The rent is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 that every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 may wish to occupy as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
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