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Rent a home or own a home which is better. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Home is the best place for live, it maybe rest or own. Some believers believe that rent a home is better then own a home but others say not. Since both point have some adventage and some disadvantages, I will discuss both post of view and will give me own opininon. On the one hand, rent a home have some advantages like there are no extra problem on it. For example, you don't need to face any problem if need to fixed anything, all problem will be solved by owner. Although, nowadays rent is too high but you don't need to face any other problem rether then rent. Although rent a home have some adventages but it also have some drawbacks. The main problem is rent is going to high every year which have no limit. Rent a house is not a permanent thing so if you want to do any activitys you unable to do like if you want to do gardening you can't do it or you need permission from your home owner. Also if you have a car then you need to pay extar for parking and all payment and bill will be increase yearly. On the other hand, own a home is a luck because now a days own a house is a dream for every person. Although it is a dream but it have some adventages and some disadvantages. To own a home you need to pay tax and update your papers regularly with government it is not a small matter. Although own a home do not have any rent but it have a lots of diffrent paper work and taxes. For example, there are home tax, land tax, income tax, yearly tax and other paper work need to do regularly. Some people think those are a problem to do. Also have some problem like when government work for road, drain or any other electronic or water problem then owner need to observe everything. Those problem can happend under own home which need to fixed by owner. In conclusion, I would like to say, both rent and own a home have adventages and disadventages. But since day by day rent is increasing to high in near future it will a big problem for everyone to who rent a house. Although own a house have some disadventages but for long time sweet house is a dream for every people where can do anything without any permission and permanently. So in my opinion own a home is better then rent a home.
Home is the best place for
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rest
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own
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Some
believers believe that
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rent
a home is
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better then
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own
a
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home
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but
others say not. Since both point have
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adventage
and
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disadvantages, I will discuss both post of view and will give me
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opininon
.

On the one hand,
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rent
a home have
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some
advantages like there are no extra
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problem
on it.
For example
, you don't
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need
to face any
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problem
if
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to
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fixed
anything, all
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problem
will
be solved
by owner. Although, nowadays
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is too high
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but
you don't
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need
to face any
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problem
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rether
then
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rent
. Although
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rent
a home have
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some
adventages
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but
it
also
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have
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some
drawbacks. The main
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problem
is
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rent
is going to high every year which have no limit.
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Rent
a
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house
is not a permanent thing
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so
if you want to do any
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activitys
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you
unable to do like if you want to do gardening you can't do
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it or
you
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need
permission from your
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home owner
.
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Also
if you have a car then you
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need
to pay
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extar
for parking and all payment and bill will be increase yearly.

On the
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other
hand,
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own
a home is a luck
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because
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now a days
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own
a
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house
is a dream for every person. Although it is a dream
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but
it
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have
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some
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adventages
and
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some
disadvantages. To
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own
a home you
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need
to pay
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tax
and update your papers
regularly
with
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government
it is not a
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small
matter. Although
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own
a home do not have any
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rent
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but
it
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have
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of
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diffrent
paper work and
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taxes
.
For example
, there are home
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tax
, land
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tax
, income
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tax
, yearly
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tax
and
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other
paper work
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need
to do
regularly
.
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Some
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people
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think
those are a
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problem
to do.
Also
have
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some
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problem
like when
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government
work for road, drain or any
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other
electronic or water
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problem
then owner
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need
to observe everything. Those
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problem
can
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under
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own
home which
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need
to
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fixed
by owner.

In conclusion
, I would like to say, both
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rent
and
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a home have
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adventages
and
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.
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since day by day
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rent
is increasing to high in near future it will a
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big
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problem
for everyone to who
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rent
a
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house
. Although
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own
a
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house
have
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some
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disadventages
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but
for long time sweet
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house
is a dream for every
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people
where can do anything without any permission and
permanently
.
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So
in my opinion
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own
a home is
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rent
a home.
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IELTS essay Rent a home or own a home which is better.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
425 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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