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Refugees settlement in Egypt.

Refugees settlement in Egypt. ywjd
Since the too late of the last century a large number of refugees had moved to Cairo for several reasons asking for asylum rights. Therefore, a large Sudanese community had been formed which representing a heavy burden on the Egyptian Government specially during this critical period. Consequently, The Egyptian Government required the International fund in order to encounter it's economical challenges. Despite this fact, a large number of the Sudanese labors demonstrated that they are professional enough to adapt in any society. Likewise, Syrian refugees have created a number of markets in different areas allover Cairo.
Since the too late of the last century
a large number of
refugees had
moved
to Cairo for several reasons asking for asylum rights.
Therefore
, a large Sudanese community had
been formed
which representing a heavy burden on the Egyptian
Government
specially
during this critical period.
Consequently
, The Egyptian
Government
required the International fund in order to encounter
it's economical challenges
. Despite this fact,
a large number of
the Sudanese labors demonstrated that they are professional
enough
to adapt in any society.
Likewise
, Syrian refugees have created a number of markets in
different
areas allover Cairo.
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IELTS essay Refugees settlement in Egypt.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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