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In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build homes there. What is your opinion about this.

In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build homes there. What is your opinion about this. jweM
An increase in population results in expansion of cities. As more residential areas are required to accommodate growing population. In many cases now cities axpended to such an extent that touched the boundries of agricultural lands and rural areas. I think this tedency in future will destroy the beauty of nature. Hence in order to protect the topography of countryside new homes should not be constructed there. Although, metropolitan have state of the art fascilities thats why many people attracted to live there. But these cities have number of problems and among those pollution is on top of the list. now if these towns are allowed to engulf farmlands then it will contaminate purity of these sights. Obviously in order to provide housing there land have to be cleared from trees, bushes and other kind of vegetations. This will destroy natural habitats of different living organisms and also ultimately result in reduction of air quality index. Surveys show that air quality index of these concrete jungles is extremely high. So this mass expansion of suburbs will increase pollution and reduce natural resorts. As provision of food is assosiated with rural areas. Now if these lands will be utilized for accommodation purposes then how it will be possible to feed rapidly growing population in future. Though, it cannot be denied more people need more space to live but new cities should be settled either in barren lands or in those areas where ecosystem could not be challenged. In conclusion, expansion of towns towards countryside will deteriorate environment as well as create other issues like, food insecurity in future, extinction of different species. So it is need of the hour to plan cities in such a way that there should be a balance between nature and human progress and prosperity.
An increase in population results in expansion of
cities
.
As
more residential
areas
are required
to accommodate growing population. In
many
cases
now
cities
axpended
to such an extent that touched the
boundries
of agricultural
lands
and rural
areas
. I
think
this
tedency
in future will
destroy
the beauty of nature.
Hence
in order to protect the topography of countryside new homes should not
be constructed
there. Although, metropolitan have state of the art
fascilities
thats
why
many
people
attracted to
live
there.
But
these
cities
have number of problems and among
those pollution
is on top of the list.
now
if these towns are
allowed
to engulf farmlands then it will contaminate purity of these sights.
Obviously
in order to provide housing there
land
have to
be cleared
from trees, bushes and other kind of
vegetations
. This will
destroy
natural habitats of
different
living organisms and
also
ultimately
result in reduction of air quality index. Surveys
show
that air quality index of these concrete jungles is
extremely
high.
So
this mass expansion of suburbs will increase pollution and
reduce
natural resorts.
As
provision of food is
assosiated
with rural
areas
.
Now
if these
lands
will
be utilized
for accommodation purposes then how it will be possible to feed
rapidly
growing population
in future
. Though, it cannot
be denied
more
people
need more space to
live
but
new
cities
should
be settled
either in barren
lands
or in those
areas
where ecosystem could not
be challenged
.
In conclusion
, expansion of towns towards countryside will deteriorate environment
as well
as create other issues like, food insecurity
in future
, extinction of
different
species.
So
it
is need
of the hour to plan
cities
in such a way that there should be a balance between nature and human progress and prosperity.
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IELTS essay In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build homes there. What is your opinion about this.

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