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In the pandemic, working from home seems to become a buzzword with everyone. Although I have not had the opportunity to work remotely yet, my online learning has certain connections with that. Despite having supervision of the lecturers and supporting materials, online lessons have not provided me with desirable results. An explanation for this is due to subjective and objective factors. Employees with seniority tended to be more productive since they could navigate the hazards of remote working is a thought-provoking detail. The reasons might be because senior workers carry in their enthusiasm, a high sense of responsibility, and relevant experiences so that they can navigate the difficulties of home-working effectively. Hence, the lesson I learned for myself is that working longer hours does not necessarily mean higher productivity. Working smarter is the key to accomplish more priorities every day. Set a particular schedule, take note of essential work to avoid missing deadlines, and find a suitable place to work comfortably that works for me.
In the pandemic,
working
from home seems to become a buzzword with everyone. Although I have not had the opportunity to
work
remotely
yet
, my online learning has certain connections with that. Despite having supervision of the lecturers and supporting materials, online lessons have not provided me with desirable results. An explanation for this is due to subjective and objective factors. Employees with seniority tended to be more productive since they could navigate the hazards of remote
working
is a
thought
-provoking detail. The reasons might be
because
senior workers carry in their enthusiasm, a high sense of responsibility, and relevant experiences
so
that they can navigate the difficulties of home-working
effectively
.
Hence
, the lesson I learned for myself is that
working
longer hours does not
necessarily
mean higher productivity.
Working
smarter is the key to accomplish more priorities every day. Set a particular schedule, take note of essential
work
to avoid missing deadlines, and find a suitable place to
work
comfortably
that works for me.
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IELTS essay reflection the reading passage

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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