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Reflection after your seventh lesson

Reflection after your seventh lesson 26Y6x
Firstly, let me introduce myself. My name is Le Ngoc Quyen. Currently I am a student in the English team of grade 11 at Que Vo 1 high school. My learning method before I got ivolved in Mr. Dien’s IELTS class was totally unproductive. At that time, I did not fully understand the usage of the words, phrases or sentences and had a limited lexical resource as well, which resulted in the fact that I did not know how to make use of the right words and grammar to form a correct sentence when I first joined in the IELTS class. Furthermore, I was not used to working in groups to discuss problems, giving my own opinions and asking for help with tricky questions previously, I did not comprehend how things work and found it quite difficult to give a clear explanation for given issues. However, since my taking Mr. Dien’s classes I saw a complete change in myself and my way of studying, especially after the seventh lesson. Mr. Dien has taught me a large amount of new understanding which is really helpful and practical. Thanks to working in pairs and groups, I become more confident and finally can express my own view, discuss problems thoroughly and point out classmates’ mistakes. I am now able to write longer sentence without having trivial mistakes. I also learned how to form my ideas through linear thinking with a view to making my outlines more logical. My classmates are quite active in each lesson, although there are some people who are still close-mouthed. My most favourite part of the course is working on vocabulary projects in the summer given that these projects help me have a wider vocabulary. Although having a hard time and troubles with the long-lasting projects, I also took great pride in finishing them. During the projects, I had chances of comprehending words, phrases, idioms and knowing more about new ones. After these projects, I feel myself more well-informed and also notice that all my grades of the tests in the English team improve significantly. In conclusion, after the seventh lesson, I have learned a lot of things. But now I find our class is a little crowded, which I think Mr. Dien should take into consideration to ensure the productivity of class performances. I hope that each of us will try our best to learn to ameliorate our study and realize our goals.
Firstly
,
let
me introduce myself. My name is Le
Ngoc
Quyen
.
Currently
I am a student in the English team of grade 11 at Que
Vo
1 high school.

My learning method
before
I
got
ivolved
in Mr.
Dien
’s IELTS
class
was
totally
unproductive. At that time, I did not
fully
understand the usage of the words, phrases or sentences and had a limited lexical resource
as well
, which resulted in the fact that I did not know how to
make
use
of the right words and grammar to form a correct sentence when I
first
joined
in the IELTS
class
.
Furthermore
, I was not
used
to working in groups to discuss problems, giving my
own
opinions and asking for
help
with tricky questions previously, I did not comprehend how things work and found it quite difficult to give a
clear
explanation for
given
issues.

However
, since my taking Mr.
Dien
’s
classes
I
saw
a complete
change
in myself and my way of studying,
especially
after the seventh lesson. Mr.
Dien
has taught me a large amount of new understanding which is
really
helpful and practical. Thanks to working in pairs and groups, I become more confident and
finally
can express my
own
view, discuss problems
thoroughly
and point out classmates’ mistakes. I am
now
able to write longer sentence without having trivial mistakes. I
also
learned how to form my
ideas
through linear thinking with a view to making my outlines more logical. My classmates are quite active in each lesson, although there are
some
people
who are
still
close-mouthed.

My most
favourite
part of the course is working on vocabulary
projects
in the summer
given
that these
projects
help
me have a wider vocabulary. Although having a
hard
time and troubles with the long-lasting
projects
, I
also
took great pride in finishing them. During the
projects
, I had chances of comprehending words, phrases, idioms and knowing more about new ones. After these
projects
, I feel myself more well-informed and
also
notice that all my grades of the
tests
in the English team
improve
significantly
.

In conclusion
, after the seventh lesson, I have learned
a lot of
things.
But
now
I find our
class
is a
little
crowded, which I
think
Mr.
Dien
should take into consideration to ensure the productivity of
class
performances. I hope that each of us will try our best to learn to ameliorate our study and realize our goals.
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IELTS essay Reflection after your seventh lesson

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
405 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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