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how did you meet your best friend?

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I and my best friend have been playing together for seven years. The first place we met was in middle school where we had been for four years. We have had good times and bad together. Sometimes we get in a fight about something. But things will get better. An is a good listener to me. When i am bored, it is someone who invites me out to relax and have fun. We have so many unforgettable memories together. Even though we are not going to go to different school in university, I am gonna keep this good relationship
I and my best friend have been playing together for seven years. The
first
place we met was in middle school where we had been for four years. We have had
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good
times and
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bad
together.
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Sometimes
we
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get
in a fight about something.
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But
things will
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get
better. An is a
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good
listener to me. When
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i
am bored
, it is someone who invites me out to relax and have fun. We have
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so
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many
unforgettable memories together.
Even though
we are not going to go to
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different
school in university, I am
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gonna
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keep
this
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good
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relationship

IELTS essay how did you meet your best friend?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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